FIC: Rollercoaster - Part 1 (M)
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mash_slashTitle: Rollercoaster - Part 1
Author: Me
Pairing: BJ/Peg; BJ/Hawkeye - implied
Rating: M
Disclaimer: Nope, don’t own anything. Don’t sue … no money.
Archive: Anywhere, just let me know.
Feedback: Would be appreciated - good or bad.
Spoilers: None, really
Summary: Peg POV - post-war. 'It was strange, but it was almost as if, through his letters, I felt myself falling in love with Hawkeye too.'
A/N: This fic is for![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
leemal10 … she knows why. I had no beta, because leemal10's my beta, and well, I wanted this fic to be a surprise for her. So, if there are any mistakes, they belong to me alone. Also, this is not an exercise in perfect writing ... it's simply a post-war, smutty, somewhat AU, completely tongue-in-cheek fic. That's it. So you probably shouldn't expect any flowing prose or beautifully worded passages ;-) Anyway, enjoy!
Rollercoaster - Part 1
Author: Me
Pairing: BJ/Peg; BJ/Hawkeye - implied
Rating: M
Disclaimer: Nope, don’t own anything. Don’t sue … no money.
Archive: Anywhere, just let me know.
Feedback: Would be appreciated - good or bad.
Spoilers: None, really
Summary: Peg POV - post-war. 'It was strange, but it was almost as if, through his letters, I felt myself falling in love with Hawkeye too.'
A/N: This fic is for
leemal10 … she knows why. I had no beta, because leemal10's my beta, and well, I wanted this fic to be a surprise for her. So, if there are any mistakes, they belong to me alone. Also, this is not an exercise in perfect writing ... it's simply a post-war, smutty, somewhat AU, completely tongue-in-cheek fic. That's it. So you probably shouldn't expect any flowing prose or beautifully worded passages ;-) Anyway, enjoy!Rollercoaster - Part 1
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Date: 2006-07-19 10:50 pm (UTC)TBC!
*snugs you gleefully*
This is *gorgeous*. Just the thing for a heat wave ;-)
Thank you!
:-) xx
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Date: 2006-07-20 12:20 am (UTC)*whistles nochalantly*
I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)
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Date: 2006-07-20 12:33 am (UTC)Hee.
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Date: 2006-07-20 02:58 am (UTC)That's true ... and actually Part 2 (there are only 2 parts) is about 2/3's finished. I had to take a break from writing it because I was getting a little too antsy which might be a problem since I haven't even gotten to any SEX yet!
But, it should be done by the weekend ... if not Friday.
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Date: 2006-07-20 03:01 am (UTC)And I can wait for the sex. Patiently *taps fingernails*. VERY patiently...
Are we there yet?
LOL!
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Date: 2006-07-20 03:18 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-07-20 12:01 am (UTC)Thank you!
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Date: 2006-07-20 12:21 am (UTC)You are very welcome and I'm so glad that you enjoyed Part 1!!!
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Date: 2006-07-20 11:55 am (UTC)I'm a great devotee of yours!
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Date: 2006-07-20 02:04 pm (UTC)D'oh! My secret identity has been discovered ;) Yep that's me. I tried to use "murf1013" and "Lisa M" for my writer name on ff.net and they were both taken already. TVjunkie1013 is actually my email address, so I just used that as my writer name :)
>>I'm a great devotee of yours!<<
*blushes* Thanks. Are you new to the LJ lists? I don't remember seeing you here before. If so ... welcome!!! I'm going to friend you, if that's okay.
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Date: 2006-07-20 09:58 pm (UTC)Pleased and honored, and thanks! I'm Chase, I'm new to M*A*S*H fandom, but I plan to make up for youth with exuberence ^^.
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Date: 2006-07-22 04:50 am (UTC)Don't worry about it. I've been unmasked before ;) Ahhhh so you're the one who keeps getting my keyboard wet with your reviews. That's okay though. I don't mind :)
>>Pleased and honored, and thanks! I'm Chase, I'm new to M*A*S*H fandom, but I plan to make up for youth with exuberence ^^. <<
Heh! Every time I see your name, I think of "Chase" from House. And exuberence is always a good thing ... especially in this fandom! I'm so glad to see that more and more people are finding M*A*S*H and all the fandoms. We need more people around here :)
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Date: 2006-07-20 01:57 am (UTC)I love the fic too, of course. One of my favorite bits was this:
>>“I had to pull over and *relieve* myself, BJ.”
“What?” He pushed himself to his elbows. “You …,” he gestured to my groin in an almost comical way. “Did *that* because you saw me, us …?” <<
It made me laugh. And I could see BJ doing that, so it just made it better.
Also liked:
>>“Have you and Hawkeye had sex with each other?”
“Peggy!” BJ shouted and pulled a pillow over his head, effectively hiding his face from me. I reached over and removed it, tossing it to the foot of the bed. It landed with a soft thud.
“I’m serious, BJ, have you?”
“Yes,” he barely managed to squeak out.<<
Because it was another bit that made me laugh, and I liked the Peg/BJ interaction. I can easily see a married couple...well, happily married couple interacting the way they do...minus the talk about inviting another man into bed.
I would so love to be Peg right now...
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Date: 2006-07-20 02:44 am (UTC)SQUEEEEEEEEEE! I'm so glad I made you at least a little bit happy. That totally made my night!!!
>>I love the fic too, of course.<<
Sooooo glad! Lee asked for some BJ/Peg/Hawkeye kink ... and who am I to deny her ;)
>>I can easily see a married couple...well, happily married couple interacting the way they do...minus the talk about inviting another man into bed.<<
That all depends on who the other man is :) I'd have no problem inviting David Duchvony into bed with me and hubby ;)
>>I would so love to be Peg right now...<<
You and me both! I just sent Lee an email telling her that I had to actually stop writting part 2 and go jump in my pool just to cool off! And I haven't even gotten to any SEX yet!!!
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Date: 2006-07-20 07:52 pm (UTC)Yeah, but would he go for it? ;)
>>I just sent Lee an email telling her that I had to actually stop writting part 2 and go jump in my pool just to cool off!<<
Hee...especially since you're writing in the first person, I'd guess it's easy to imagine yourself there...
Now, stop jumping in the pool and get writing!! Um, please. :)
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Date: 2006-07-20 10:18 pm (UTC)Heh! I just sent Lee an email telling her that this was just supposed to be a short little smutty 3-way drabble ... then it turned into a 2-parter ... now it's going onto a part 3 (the s.e.x. part)!!! GAH!
>>Hee...especially since you're writing in the first person, I'd guess it's easy to imagine yourself there...<
Heeeeeeee! especially because Peg's a woman ... so I can actually see the stuff happening and I know how things would work when it's involving 2 m's and 1 w. :)
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Date: 2006-07-21 03:23 pm (UTC)The more the better. As long as you finish and don't leave it incomplete forever.
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Date: 2006-07-21 07:35 pm (UTC)Well, part 2 is done. It will be posted later tonight. Part 3 isn't written, but I plan to start and finish that by Monday. :) So don't worry ... it will be finished ... and soonly :D
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Date: 2006-07-21 08:40 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-07-20 02:01 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-07-20 02:17 pm (UTC)>>Peg is one smart lady....seriously. <<
And a very lucky one, too :) I would so love to be her. LOVE to be her!!!
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Date: 2006-07-21 06:11 am (UTC)I actually started getting a little antsy too *giggles like a school girl* I eagerly anticipate part 2!
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Date: 2006-07-21 01:43 pm (UTC)Part 3 isn't even written yet, but should be done no later than Monday.
I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)