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FIC: Rollercoaster - Part 1 (M)

Title: Rollercoaster - Part 1
Author: Me
Pairing: BJ/Peg; BJ/Hawkeye - implied
Rating: M
Disclaimer: Nope, don’t own anything. Don’t sue … no money.
Archive: Anywhere, just let me know.
Feedback: Would be appreciated - good or bad.
Spoilers: None, really
Summary: Peg POV - post-war. 'It was strange, but it was almost as if, through his letters, I felt myself falling in love with Hawkeye too.'

A/N: This fic is for

leemal10 … she knows why. I had no beta, because

leemal10's my beta, and well, I wanted this fic to be a surprise for her. So, if there are any mistakes, they belong to me alone. Also, this is not an exercise in perfect writing ... it's simply a post-war, smutty, somewhat AU, completely tongue-in-cheek fic. That's it. So you probably shouldn't expect any flowing prose or beautifully worded passages ;-) Anyway, enjoy!

Rollercoaster - Part 1

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Now there are three little letters that have just made me one of the happiest people ever...

TBC!

*snugs you gleefully*

This is *gorgeous*. Just the thing for a heat wave ;-)

Thank you!

:-) xx

Why thank you! You made me LOL though ... I don't know if anyone has ever been happy about a ~TBC~ ... especially because it usually means the fic isn't finished yet.

*whistles nochalantly*

I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)

It means it's not finished, yes...but that means *drumroll* More To Come!

Hee.

>>More To Come!<<

That's true ... and actually Part 2 (there are only 2 parts) is about 2/3's finished. I had to take a break from writing it because I was getting a little too antsy which might be a problem since I haven't even gotten to any SEX yet!

But, it should be done by the weekend ... if not Friday.

Ooh! *bounces*

And I can wait for the sex. Patiently *taps fingernails*. VERY patiently...

Are we there yet?

LOL!

Squeeeeeeeeeee! Love the icon ;)

Hee, aww, that's a happymaking story! I sure hope that TBC is soonish!

Thank you!

Thank you so much for the FB! The ~TBC~ is about 1/2 finished and will hopefully be finished very soonly :)

You are very welcome and I'm so glad that you enjoyed Part 1!!!

Saaaaay, you're TVJunkie1013, aren't you?

I'm a great devotee of yours!

>>Saaaaay, you're TVJunkie1013, aren't you?<<

D'oh! My secret identity has been discovered ;) Yep that's me. I tried to use "murf1013" and "Lisa M" for my writer name on ff.net and they were both taken already. TVjunkie1013 is actually my email address, so I just used that as my writer name :)

>>I'm a great devotee of yours!<<

*blushes* Thanks. Are you new to the LJ lists? I don't remember seeing you here before. If so ... welcome!!! I'm going to friend you, if that's okay.

Hee hee, sorry to unmask you so publicly; I know normally you prefer to change in a phone booth. I've written you some rather drool-soaked reviews on ff.net, I use ElyahGray.

Pleased and honored, and thanks! I'm Chase, I'm new to M*A*S*H fandom, but I plan to make up for youth with exuberence ^^.

>>Hee hee, sorry to unmask you so publicly; I know normally you prefer to change in a phone booth. I've written you some rather drool-soaked reviews on ff.net, I use ElyahGray.<<

Don't worry about it. I've been unmasked before ;) Ahhhh so you're the one who keeps getting my keyboard wet with your reviews. That's okay though. I don't mind :)

>>Pleased and honored, and thanks! I'm Chase, I'm new to M*A*S*H fandom, but I plan to make up for youth with exuberence ^^. <<

Heh! Every time I see your name, I think of "Chase" from House. And exuberence is always a good thing ... especially in this fandom! I'm so glad to see that more and more people are finding M*A*S*H and all the fandoms. We need more people around here :)

I love you. You couldn't have posted such a thing at a better time. I've giggled for the first time since Saturday.

I love the fic too, of course. One of my favorite bits was this:
>>“I had to pull over and *relieve* myself, BJ.”

“What?” He pushed himself to his elbows. “You …,” he gestured to my groin in an almost comical way. “Did *that* because you saw me, us …?” <<

It made me laugh. And I could see BJ doing that, so it just made it better.

Also liked:
>>“Have you and Hawkeye had sex with each other?”

“Peggy!” BJ shouted and pulled a pillow over his head, effectively hiding his face from me. I reached over and removed it, tossing it to the foot of the bed. It landed with a soft thud.

“I’m serious, BJ, have you?”

“Yes,” he barely managed to squeak out.<<

Because it was another bit that made me laugh, and I liked the Peg/BJ interaction. I can easily see a married couple...well, happily married couple interacting the way they do...minus the talk about inviting another man into bed.

I would so love to be Peg right now...

>>I love you. You couldn't have posted such a thing at a better time. I've giggled for the first time since Saturday.<<

SQUEEEEEEEEEE! I'm so glad I made you at least a little bit happy. That totally made my night!!!

>>I love the fic too, of course.<<

Sooooo glad! Lee asked for some BJ/Peg/Hawkeye kink ... and who am I to deny her ;)

>>I can easily see a married couple...well, happily married couple interacting the way they do...minus the talk about inviting another man into bed.<<

That all depends on who the other man is :) I'd have no problem inviting David Duchvony into bed with me and hubby ;)

>>I would so love to be Peg right now...<<

You and me both! I just sent Lee an email telling her that I had to actually stop writting part 2 and go jump in my pool just to cool off! And I haven't even gotten to any SEX yet!!!

>>That all depends on who the other man is :) I'd have no problem inviting David Duchvony into bed with me and hubby ;)<<
Yeah, but would he go for it? ;)

>>I just sent Lee an email telling her that I had to actually stop writting part 2 and go jump in my pool just to cool off!<<
Hee...especially since you're writing in the first person, I'd guess it's easy to imagine yourself there...

Now, stop jumping in the pool and get writing!! Um, please. :)

>>Now, stop jumping in the pool and get writing!! Um, please. :)<<

Heh! I just sent Lee an email telling her that this was just supposed to be a short little smutty 3-way drabble ... then it turned into a 2-parter ... now it's going onto a part 3 (the s.e.x. part)!!! GAH!

>>Hee...especially since you're writing in the first person, I'd guess it's easy to imagine yourself there...<

Heeeeeeee! especially because Peg's a woman ... so I can actually see the stuff happening and I know how things would work when it's involving 2 m's and 1 w. :)

>>Heh! I just sent Lee an email telling her that this was just supposed to be a short little smutty 3-way drabble ... then it turned into a 2-parter ... now it's going onto a part 3 (the s.e.x. part)!!! GAH!<<

The more the better. As long as you finish and don't leave it incomplete forever.

>>The more the better. As long as you finish and don't leave it incomplete forever.<<

Well, part 2 is done. It will be posted later tonight. Part 3 isn't written, but I plan to start and finish that by Monday. :) So don't worry ... it will be finished ... and soonly :D

Yay! *waits impatiently*

Peg is one smart lady....seriously. BJ and Hawkeye.....o wow...he he ;)

Squeeeee! Thanks! So glad you enjoyed it.

>>Peg is one smart lady....seriously. <<

And a very lucky one, too :) I would so love to be her. LOVE to be her!!!

I want to be Peg! She has to be the luckiest woman in the whole damn world!

I actually started getting a little antsy too *giggles like a school girl* I eagerly anticipate part 2!

Heeeeeeee! It was originally supposed to be just a short little smutty drabble. Now it's going to be 3 chapters!!! Part 2 is done and just needs a little tweaking ... but it should be posted sometime today.

Part 3 isn't even written yet, but should be done no later than Monday.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

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