M*A*S*H Slash

okay:

seriously, guys, i have been working on this since before thanksgiving time; it's about three pages in ms word. goddamn i wish i didn't fail so hard at everything english related. it may be time to select a new university major. GOD THOUGH I DON'T EVEN CARE. please like this? i feel like it's not really as pretty as things i've written in the past, but you know war is not pretty? or something.

i would like to say that this is largely inspired by this poem that was sent to me around the start of fall:

your absence is a thread
pulled through my being.
everything i do
is stitched with its colour.

good stuff, right? well HERE'S SOME HAWKEYE/BJ WITH A SIDE OF HAWKEYE/TRAPPER. WHAT THE HELL ELSE IS NEW RIGHT.

twenty years of snow
teapot_yo
hawkeye/bj
7+

( what would love be without wishful thinking? )

MMKAY SO. I haven't posted anything in six months, which I think for anyone else would be indicative of the fact that they'd found a new fandom, but for me means that I haven't written a blessed word in six months, save for this piece which I wrote for hashbash, meant to post here, and then never did. Yeeeeah organization! ANYWAY the point is that:

a) I really like this story. I read it over, changed a few teeny tiny little things from back in October, and declared it one of my personal favorites, out of the things that I've written for M*A*S*H. (AHAHAHA I have written a grand total of FIVE things though so that doesn't really mean anything at all.)
b) I would like you to read this please and then offer some criticism if you've got it! Pretty much anything would be cool short of, "this revelation should be punchier please!", because really for me this piece is about style. I'm going to be showing it to my father in a few days, and his opinion really, really means a great deal to me, and honestly I just want to show him the best little story I can. YOU KNOW HOW IT IS. (Ahahaha also sekritly we're going to pretend that it's relatively new because hehe he thinks I wrote it for Mike Farrell's birthday. Hopefully he will not realize that the name "BJ" does not appear in here a single time?)

So, without further ado, here you go!

Title: A Hazy Shade of Winter
Pairing: Hawkeye/Sidney
Disclaimer: This show is obviously not mine because Hawkeye and BJ never engaged in anything even remotely mistakable for what my grandma refers to as "getting sexy". :(
Rating: Let's go ahead and slap a PG-13 on it and be done with it.

( i'll write you a postcard, i'll send you the news // from a house down the road from real love. )

Umm I am a feedback monster and I am rearing my ugly head! Here's some PG-13 Hawkeye/Trapper! Emphasis is fun!

(Cross-posted! To teapot_yo and mash_challenge! I am not kidding about the emphasis thing!)

(On a more serious note, this is the first Trapper-related thing I've ever written, and I kind of like it. So here you are!)

( there's still a little bit of your ghost / your witness. )

This is some B-eye. It's about PG and actually rather nice in spite of being completely harmless. The lovely, lovely sarcasticsra looked over it for me to make sure everything was good. And on the seventh day she rested, and it was good. Basically she's lovely. And I hope that you like this.

( i'm not a miracle and you're not a saint )

Hi again :) Well, I know this business about 'poor Hawkeye turns emo and then BJ comforts him' has absolutely been done to death. And I also know that the only thing I’ve ever posted here was angsty B-eye as well. But obviously you must be saturated. So... I apologize for the lack of variety, but please try to enjoy, as this features tolerant!Charles, who is my favorite of the fanon characters. (Actually this fic is an exercise in tolerant!Charles. I'm finding that it's easier to get away with Charles speaking prettily than Klinger, and I'd like your opinion on him.)


( blessed are the illusion dwellers )

I just stumbled across this wonderful community and had to join. I wrote this a while ago, but I'm going to post it here anyway as a New Year/Community-Joining offering. It's Hawkeye/BJ and I hope you like it. (It's under a cut for length.)


( i know that i am like the rain / there but for the grace of you go i )