M*A*S*H Slash

First off, a fic I wrote earlier this week. Hawkeye meets up with Trapper after the war and is shocked to find how much things have changed between them.

( The More Things Change )

And a question: I assume some of you out there have experience with fanfiction.net. Does anyone have any recommendations, postive or negative for joining that site?

I keep being bothered by how much you don't see of BJ's transition upon arriving in camp. Welcome to Korea is a great episode, but you don't get to see any of his firsts after he arrives. You don't get to see his first time meeting Mulcahy or Klinger or his first night or his first OR session or his first meal or......
So over the past few weeks, I've been struggling to write this fic, on BJ's first night in camp. I finally stopped constantly editing it and declared it done. I'm still not entirely pleased with the voice though.
So, I submit for your criticism:

( First Letter Home )

Like I said when I introduced myself, I'm pretty new to the idea of fan fiction. But here's my first fic. Hawkeye's thoughts 15 years after the war. Not slashy. Just as a warning, it is a bit long.

I already posted it in my LJ so I'll just link to that here rather then copy and pasting it somewhere else:

For What It's Worth