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[nutmeg4077.livejournal.com]

'Lo, everyone. First post here, though not my first M*A*S*H fic, and I come bearing...BJ/Trapper?

Title: Fire and Ice, 1&2/?
By: nutmeg4077
Rating: PG-13 so far
Category: Gen/Angst/Romance
Pairing: BJ/Trapper
Summary: What if Hawkeye, and not Trapper, had been the one to leave?
Warnings: Crazy thinking, possible badness.
Notes: Thanks to hawkeyecat for the beta...this...this fic scares me a lot.
Disclaimer: I don't own them. Things would be verrrryyy different if I did.

(This cut is so fake!)

x-posted to my journal.

Comments

[janecarnall.livejournal.com]

Aw, that's sweet!

Poor BJ. Poor Trapper.

So, what's in the letter?

[jaybee-bug.livejournal.com]

This is great so far. What a cool premise. Even better, you write it well. ;oD Excellent characterisation, I eagerly await the next chappys.

[murf1013.livejournal.com]

Wow! I just read this and loved it! Are you planning on continuing it? I hope so! I'd love to know what was in that letter ... what would make Trapper call Hawkeye a (and I may get the exact wording wrong...) backstabbing, ungrateful prick.

Yikes!

And I LOVE how Trapper called BJ 'California'. Great job!

[hawk1701.livejournal.com]

Whoa, awesome, you write wonderfully! I wish i could write so well, really, you've got Trapper, BJ, all the characters down so perfectly i don't know what else to say except write more. Like the letter, are we gonna be able to read it? And what is Frank getting at exactly? What happenes next? It's brilliant, i would have never thought of Trapper staying and Hawk going, but i love it. Good luck.