FIC: Evolution

[murf1013.livejournal.com]

Title: Evolution
Author: Me
Pairing: BJ/Hawkeye; Hawkeye/Trapper implied
Rating: Everyone (Corporal)
Disclaimer: Nope, don’t own anything. Don’t sue … no money.
Archive: Anywhere, just let me know.
Feedback: Would be appreciated - good or bad.
Spoilers: Small ones for Welcome to Korea, Preventive Medicine and Goodbye, Farewell and Amen, but nothing major - this fic won‘t spoil the episodes for you.
Summary: Things change.

A/N: I’m having angst issues … and it’s flooding into my fics. Sorry. There is a tense change … it is intentional.


Evolution

Comments

[mijmeraar.livejournal.com]

I really like the premise, that so many barriers were destroyed even within the first day, because it's true. BJ was able to help Hawkeye heal from the loss.

And it would be *ours*.

Yes. I love Period of Adjustment, and the two sitting there building their still is one reason why. It says so many things of their relationship. I like the inclusion of this.

It probably could have been expanded on, but still conveys the message well =)

[murf1013.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the feedback!!!

>>Yes. I love Period of Adjustment, and the two sitting there building their still is one reason why. It says so many things of their relationship.<<

One of my favorite scenes between them. It speaks volumes about them ... and on so many levels.

>>It probably could have been expanded on,<<

Heh! Why is everyone always telling me to expand my fics? ;) Just kidding!!! but seriously ... I'm told that all the time :)

>>but still conveys the message well <<

Thanks!

By the way ... who is the hot man in your icon? I've been meaning to ask you that for like ever!

[mijmeraar.livejournal.com]

Perhaps it's because we're all greedy mugs who just wantwantwant ;) I think I've just seen great improvement in your writing and the length, the chance you give yourself to explore the chracters and their realtionships further, helps with that.

Heeee! That is Jensen Ackles (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v725/jerninghamstreet/Photoshoot-AlisonDyer-03.jpg) and he's among many of those that occupy my Happy Place. He's in Supernatural, but had bit parts in shows like Dark Angel and Smallville. Has a strange attraction to sci fi/fantasy, methinks. Please, go forth, ogle.

[murf1013.livejournal.com]

>>Perhaps it's because we're all greedy mugs who just wantwantwant <<

Well, I can't argue with that ... considering the fact that I'm the same way with *other* people's fics ;)

>>I think I've just seen great improvement in your writing <<

*blushes* Thanks.

>>Please, go forth, ogle.<<

Ah, yes. I will do so. Always happy to ogle pretty men :)