FIC: View From The Outside (13+)

[murf1013.livejournal.com]

Title: View From The Outside
Author: Me
Pairing: BJ/Hawkeye
Rating: 13+
Disclaimer: Nope, don’t own anything. Don’t sue … no money.
Archive: Anywhere, just let me know.
Feedback: Would be appreciated - good or bad.
Spoilers: None.
Summary: Charles POV - Charles sees things about BJ and Hawkeye that others don’t.


View From The Outside

Comments

[fairestofkisses.livejournal.com]

What I loved most about this, out of everything, is that when I read it I heard Charles' voice saying it all. You got him peggd, all right. Lovely. ♥ :D

[murf1013.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I was so worried about my Charles-voice that I think I sent this fic to my beta like 10 times before I felt comfortable enough to post it.

So thank you even more for your kind words!

[flamingkitsune.livejournal.com]

Like up thar said, imagining Charles' voice reading this assured me that you hit the nail on the head with his personality. I enjoyed this, good job.