M*A*S*H Slash

Hi, well as the title suggests Im kinda new to the community and well slash writing in general. I do have a klinger /frank that I wrote, horribly I hasten to add and well would love some feedback on it on how to improve the slash writing in it and well the writing in general. I'm thinking if anyones the people to ask you folks are. Some of it may have already read it with it being up on ff.net but still feedback, constructive critasm or comments telling me its horrible and to just give up on slash now would really help as Im struggling to write the sequal. Thanks in advance....

"Thriller/Chiller"

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Hopefully edited to do a lj-cut. Thanks to chibicelchan for telling me how to.