I had got to thinking you would never update, and tonight I come stumbling home, flick through my f-list and find this, like a glistening shiny thing discovered in the bottom of one's sock drawer.
I absolutely love this story. I love the realness more than anything - the way Peg scolds the kid for saying the word 'homosexual', BJ's inner conflict, the way the story comes to an end without actually ending, leaving so much left to say - what do they do next? Does BJ tell any of this to Peg? Does Charlie actually get Hawkeye into trouble? I love the way you leave us with the prospect of so much more to come without the need to tell us about it. The ending is incredibly realistic.
Gah, I'm blabbering. I'll go away now. Again - looooooove it ^_^
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Date: 2005-12-28 11:43 pm (UTC)I absolutely love this story. I love the realness more than anything - the way Peg scolds the kid for saying the word 'homosexual', BJ's inner conflict, the way the story comes to an end without actually ending, leaving so much left to say - what do they do next? Does BJ tell any of this to Peg? Does Charlie actually get Hawkeye into trouble? I love the way you leave us with the prospect of so much more to come without the need to tell us about it. The ending is incredibly realistic.
Gah, I'm blabbering. I'll go away now. Again - looooooove it ^_^