Ouch. Some of those comments are unnecessarily harsh.
Thinking about Hawkeye means thinking about Korea. I like that line.
I think the first version is powerful and at first I liked it better, but after rereading it, I think that the second version is better. It is interesting to see how Trapper offhandedly assumes that Hawkeye will be fine without him, but when it comes down to it, he can't live without Hawkeye.
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Date: 2005-06-10 11:23 pm (UTC)Thinking about Hawkeye means thinking about Korea. I like that line.
I think the first version is powerful and at first I liked it better, but after rereading it, I think that the second version is better. It is interesting to see how Trapper offhandedly assumes that Hawkeye will be fine without him, but when it comes down to it, he can't live without Hawkeye.