really liked both of these. hawkeye's thoughts in the first were wonderful and the last line was great. the second one was poignant, with the feeling of unsureness. loved this line especially: "The way it is right now is perfect (except for the part where it isn’t)"
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Date: 2008-02-24 05:04 am (UTC)