Date: 2005-06-07 07:09 am (UTC)
fixed, got rid of all the extra o's

Well, about 2/3rds of them, anyway. ;-) Sorry to be so picky, but so many typos in the first paragraph (particularly when it's a quote from an episode and you could have confirmed the correct spelling by googling on it - would have taken thirty seconds) just automatically puts me off the rest of the story - I mean literally makes it unreadable. It strongly indicates that the story was dashed off with no checking.

It's a nice idea and Sidney and Mulcahy would be a cute couple.

I'm sorry. When I have this little to say about a story, I usually don't comment at all. I wanted to be able to read it, and I appreciate your removing enough of the extra o's for me to be able to get through it, but I really don't have a lot to say about it.
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