Re: edits

Date: 2004-12-14 09:52 am (UTC)
Thanks, think you're right about the commas though I don't have time to change now. I wrote it quite quickly (I was supposed to be writing an essy) and I didn't do my usual trick of grabbing an English language student and telling them to proofread. Glad you liked it though, both of you.
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