:) You realize you are absolutely amazing, don't you? Or should I tell you again? You. Are. Amazing.
You did it. Without a Klinger striptease even (outtake?) This fic is beautiful and heart-breaking an amazing and just perfect. You captured such distinct voices so perfectly. You've got Hawkeye down absolutely perfectly - not the joking/slapstick/mask to the world Hawkeye but the world weary broken Hawkeye. The slight differences, the bitterness to the humor even the way he looks and moves I can see him and hear him speak. And you've got Charles too.
I also loved the analogy with Radar and van gogh and all the letters that weren't right and.. :) never stop writing or I'll make Ryan start crying and never stop.
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Date: 2005-07-15 07:27 pm (UTC)You realize you are absolutely amazing, don't you?
Or should I tell you again?
You. Are. Amazing.
You did it. Without a Klinger striptease even (outtake?)
This fic is beautiful and heart-breaking an amazing and just perfect.
You captured such distinct voices so perfectly.
You've got Hawkeye down absolutely perfectly - not the joking/slapstick/mask to the world Hawkeye but the world weary broken Hawkeye. The slight differences, the bitterness to the humor even the way he looks and moves I can see him and hear him speak.
And you've got Charles too.
I also loved the analogy with Radar and van gogh and all the letters that weren't right and..
:)
never stop writing or I'll make Ryan start crying and never stop.