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If I were to do some series work would
there be someone out there who would give it a once over before I
posted the chapters on list and kick my behind about falling behind
if need be?

I intend on writing it out completely before posting it bit it would
be nice to have someone on hand to look at it and say "This is crap,
don't post" or "change this" ect. Usually I don't worry about it this
much but I will be writing my very first graphic sex scene and would
like some err, guidance, to stop me writing something stupid.

If you say yes I'll send you the end of the story (the only part that
is actually written so far)

X posted on mailing list

[ashilleong.livejournal.com]

If I were to do some series work would
there be someone out there who would give it a once over before I
posted the chapters on list and kick my behind about falling behind
if need be?

I intend on writing it out completely before posting it bit it would
be nice to have someone on hand to look at it and say "This is crap,
don't post" or "change this" ect. Usually I don't worry about it this
much but I will be writing my very first graphic sex scene and would
like some err, guidance, to stop me writing something stupid.

If you say yes I'll send you the end of the story (the only part that
is actually written so far)