Oh wow, that was... powerful, and beautiful, and -really- great. I love your prose, I really do.
Your portrait of their relationship is, I think, truly spot on... Hawk's frustration with BJ because things can't be as simple as with Trapper, and yet his knowledge that because of that -- because of him -- they're more. And you had whole bunch of amazing lines..
"The great thing about Hawkeye is how he’s able to see through blood and dirt and grime into truth and equate it into beauty, even when it isn’t pretty."
That's really wonderful. And I like how... fragile your BJ thinks he is, haha, if you know what I mean. And I'm sure you do.
Really, a great piece. I could pick pieces out for ages, but I'll shut up now.
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Date: 2007-04-10 11:30 am (UTC)Your portrait of their relationship is, I think, truly spot on... Hawk's frustration with BJ because things can't be as simple as with Trapper, and yet his knowledge that because of that -- because of him -- they're more. And you had whole bunch of amazing lines..
"The great thing about Hawkeye is how he’s able to see through blood and dirt and grime into truth and equate it into beauty, even when it isn’t pretty."
That's really wonderful. And I like how... fragile your BJ thinks he is, haha, if you know what I mean. And I'm sure you do.
Really, a great piece. I could pick pieces out for ages, but I'll shut up now.