This was wonderful. Truly wonderful. The voices were very honest-Hawkeye's guilt, but at the same time his refusal to just gloss over the more scandalous details of his thoughts, Mulcahy's willingness to feel guilt over his feelings making him possibly violate his vows, but not the feelings themselves-it was awesome. I love this pairing, and the instances of fanfiction that address it can literally be counted on fingers and toes. That said, I don't suppose you'd want to write a companion piece to this where they actually resolve this...or the prequel of the kiss that started it all...
You are my new best friend
Date: 2006-11-26 05:56 am (UTC)