[identity profile] ecto-gammat.livejournal.com2008-03-15 02:44 am
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Why hullo there :D

Though I might as well introduce myself. I've been a lurker on here for quite some time, reading all the archives. I've been a fan of M*A*S*H for as long as I can remember, and a fan of slash for even longer XP

I'm looking for a beta for my first ever fanfic. Would anyone be interested?

Edit: as suggested.. my pairing is BJ/Hawkeye, from Peg's POV. Also, it's relatively short, around 950 words (or 2 pages in Word)
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[identity profile] ecto-gammat.livejournal.com2008-03-15 02:44 am
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Why hullo there :D

Though I might as well introduce myself. I've been a lurker on here for quite some time, reading all the archives. I've been a fan of M*A*S*H for as long as I can remember, and a fan of slash for even longer XP

I'm looking for a beta for my first ever fanfic. Would anyone be interested?

Edit: as suggested.. my pairing is BJ/Hawkeye, from Peg's POV. Also, it's relatively short, around 950 words (or 2 pages in Word)
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[identity profile] trapnhawksbaby.livejournal.com2007-12-02 10:42 pm
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Beta Reader-FOUND Thanks!

I'm looking for a Beta Reader. Apparently I need some help proof reading my stories. Please help! Thanks! :) 
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[identity profile] trapnhawksbaby.livejournal.com2007-12-02 10:42 pm
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Beta Reader-FOUND Thanks!

I'm looking for a Beta Reader. Apparently I need some help proof reading my stories. Please help! Thanks! :) 
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[identity profile] trapnhawksbaby.livejournal.com2007-11-18 08:31 pm
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Hello All!

Stupid me just realized that I never have introduced myself. I've been part of the Yahoo group for a while, but I just recently got involved with LJ. My OTP is Trapper/Hawkeye, but I love to write any Trapper pairing along with the occasional Frank fic. I'm starting to tolerate Hawkeye/BJ, but only for Hawkeye's sake. I'm also kind of looking for a Beta Reader if anyone's interested. I need someone to make sure that I've been able to capture the characters and my stories ring true. I've been working on a few fics here lately, so hopefully I'll be able to post some soon.
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[identity profile] trapnhawksbaby.livejournal.com2007-11-18 08:31 pm
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Hello All!

Stupid me just realized that I never have introduced myself. I've been part of the Yahoo group for a while, but I just recently got involved with LJ. My OTP is Trapper/Hawkeye, but I love to write any Trapper pairing along with the occasional Frank fic. I'm starting to tolerate Hawkeye/BJ, but only for Hawkeye's sake. I'm also kind of looking for a Beta Reader if anyone's interested. I need someone to make sure that I've been able to capture the characters and my stories ring true. I've been working on a few fics here lately, so hopefully I'll be able to post some soon.
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[identity profile] qzee.livejournal.com2007-09-14 12:04 pm
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one that is familiar with the Jewish culture and religion. I have five short stories of a Sidney Freedman/Hawkeye Pierce series. With two more short stories to go. All of it is from Sidney's point of view. The one story I'm most worried about is the fourth, 988 words long, where Sidney explains how his faith has grown and changed over time. I definitely need someone to read through that and make sure what he says rings true of someone who is Jewish. The others have only a brief mention of Sidney's ancestry and I'm not too concerned about having them read over, but I would still love to have someone go through them.

So, anyone willing to read over the fourth in the series to make sure it rings true? Reading the first three is not necessary as it could be a stand alone story easily.

Would you also be willing to read the others I've already typed up?

Reply if you're willing to do either.
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[identity profile] qzee.livejournal.com2007-09-14 12:04 pm
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one that is familiar with the Jewish culture and religion. I have five short stories of a Sidney Freedman/Hawkeye Pierce series. With two more short stories to go. All of it is from Sidney's point of view. The one story I'm most worried about is the fourth, 988 words long, where Sidney explains how his faith has grown and changed over time. I definitely need someone to read through that and make sure what he says rings true of someone who is Jewish. The others have only a brief mention of Sidney's ancestry and I'm not too concerned about having them read over, but I would still love to have someone go through them.

So, anyone willing to read over the fourth in the series to make sure it rings true? Reading the first three is not necessary as it could be a stand alone story easily.

Would you also be willing to read the others I've already typed up?

Reply if you're willing to do either.
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[identity profile] mijmeraar.livejournal.com2005-09-02 10:11 pm
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I'm here to plead shamelessly with fellow Mash Slashers.

I have a piece that I've been tearing apart, re-writing and being angsty over for weeks, for the [livejournal.com profile] hashbash challenge. I was hoping I could get somebody to beta it for me, because I have the sinking suspicion it might really need it.

So if there's anyone willing, that has the spare time, to be brutal with it (it's only about 1,200 words), I would greatly appreciate it. Greatly, greatly appreciate it.

EDIT: I should have added earlier that I'd be happy to look over other's work as well, for the [livejournal.com profile] hashbash or no. I tend to have a bit of time on my hands, so if you're stuck ...
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I'm here to plead shamelessly with fellow Mash Slashers.

I have a piece that I've been tearing apart, re-writing and being angsty over for weeks, for the [livejournal.com profile] hashbash challenge. I was hoping I could get somebody to beta it for me, because I have the sinking suspicion it might really need it.

So if there's anyone willing, that has the spare time, to be brutal with it (it's only about 1,200 words), I would greatly appreciate it. Greatly, greatly appreciate it.

EDIT: I should have added earlier that I'd be happy to look over other's work as well, for the [livejournal.com profile] hashbash or no. I tend to have a bit of time on my hands, so if you're stuck ...
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[identity profile] the-suitcase.livejournal.com2005-08-21 05:04 am
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Hi. I've got a bunch of questions. I'm looking for some help. I've scoured the internet and couldn't find anything on my own (or maybe I'm just stupid). Might as well just ask.

1. Amidst the inconsistencies on the show that we've all come to know and love, did they ever mention Trapper having siblings?
2. Is there anyway someone could beta something I'd planned on sending to hawkeye'smartini for the hasbash fic challenge? It would be massively appreciated, I'd love you forever, and everything. I really hate asking, I'm insecure as hell and not worthy, but really - I'll love you forever. If it matters, it's attempting to tackle challenge #8 - the smut/fluff one -with an element of #4 - the "caught" one - thrown in for good measure, and Hawkeye/BJ.
3. We know from "Welcome to Korea" that BJ is 28 upon arrival...and Hawkeye is a couple years older? So, um, where would Trapper fit into that, age-wise?
4. Um, I forgot what I was going to say. Please disregard this number.

I looked through the userinfo and didn't see anything, but if I wasn't supposed to ask #2 like this, I'm sorry. Yell at me, delete, whatever needs to be done.

1&3 (and probably 4 if I could remember what it was) imply that I really haven't spent a whole lot of time watching seasons 1-3, which is sort of true (I've seen all season 1, most of 2, and none of 3). And that I should probably stay away from trying to write Trapper. I promise to light my notebook on fire if it gets really ugly and I realize I'm committig bad!fic.

Alright, I'll shut up now.
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Hi. I've got a bunch of questions. I'm looking for some help. I've scoured the internet and couldn't find anything on my own (or maybe I'm just stupid). Might as well just ask.

1. Amidst the inconsistencies on the show that we've all come to know and love, did they ever mention Trapper having siblings?
2. Is there anyway someone could beta something I'd planned on sending to hawkeye'smartini for the hasbash fic challenge? It would be massively appreciated, I'd love you forever, and everything. I really hate asking, I'm insecure as hell and not worthy, but really - I'll love you forever. If it matters, it's attempting to tackle challenge #8 - the smut/fluff one -with an element of #4 - the "caught" one - thrown in for good measure, and Hawkeye/BJ.
3. We know from "Welcome to Korea" that BJ is 28 upon arrival...and Hawkeye is a couple years older? So, um, where would Trapper fit into that, age-wise?
4. Um, I forgot what I was going to say. Please disregard this number.

I looked through the userinfo and didn't see anything, but if I wasn't supposed to ask #2 like this, I'm sorry. Yell at me, delete, whatever needs to be done.

1&3 (and probably 4 if I could remember what it was) imply that I really haven't spent a whole lot of time watching seasons 1-3, which is sort of true (I've seen all season 1, most of 2, and none of 3). And that I should probably stay away from trying to write Trapper. I promise to light my notebook on fire if it gets really ugly and I realize I'm committig bad!fic.

Alright, I'll shut up now.
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[identity profile] lucythedragon.livejournal.com2005-06-25 03:12 pm
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The wild mating call of the beta-reader

Looking for a beta-reader for the first MASH fanfiction I've ever completed. It's a short (two and a half pages in Word) BJ/Hawkeye. I'm good with my grammar and all that, so what I really need is for somebody to look after my characterization and voice. And perhaps a suggestion for a better title. *sourface*

If you're interested, please reply and we'll swap email addies.
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[identity profile] lucythedragon.livejournal.com2005-06-25 03:12 pm
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The wild mating call of the beta-reader

Looking for a beta-reader for the first MASH fanfiction I've ever completed. It's a short (two and a half pages in Word) BJ/Hawkeye. I'm good with my grammar and all that, so what I really need is for somebody to look after my characterization and voice. And perhaps a suggestion for a better title. *sourface*

If you're interested, please reply and we'll swap email addies.
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[identity profile] ebcahavoc.livejournal.com2004-08-01 02:43 pm
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Hi, everybody.
I have a Mulcahy Post-war fic that I just finished, and I was wondering if anyone would be interesting in beta-ing?
Please let me know, thanks!
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Hi, everybody.
I have a Mulcahy Post-war fic that I just finished, and I was wondering if anyone would be interesting in beta-ing?
Please let me know, thanks!
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[identity profile] ashilleong.livejournal.com2003-09-18 11:01 am
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If I were to do some series work would
there be someone out there who would give it a once over before I
posted the chapters on list and kick my behind about falling behind
if need be?

I intend on writing it out completely before posting it bit it would
be nice to have someone on hand to look at it and say "This is crap,
don't post" or "change this" ect. Usually I don't worry about it this
much but I will be writing my very first graphic sex scene and would
like some err, guidance, to stop me writing something stupid.

If you say yes I'll send you the end of the story (the only part that
is actually written so far)
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X posted on mailing list

If I were to do some series work would
there be someone out there who would give it a once over before I
posted the chapters on list and kick my behind about falling behind
if need be?

I intend on writing it out completely before posting it bit it would
be nice to have someone on hand to look at it and say "This is crap,
don't post" or "change this" ect. Usually I don't worry about it this
much but I will be writing my very first graphic sex scene and would
like some err, guidance, to stop me writing something stupid.

If you say yes I'll send you the end of the story (the only part that
is actually written so far)
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[identity profile] dougs.livejournal.com2003-03-25 09:14 am
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Ah, sweet distress, thy name is Slash.

Memo to self: Do not compose Fan Fiction while commuting.

You know you're going too far with your latest work-in-progress when you bump into an old friend as you get off the train and they look at your face and say "blimey, who died?" to you.

Ready for beta in a few day's time, volunteers sought. Not a pairing I've done before. Not a pairing I've seen before, even.

And it'll be another short one. Some would say too short.
I take a different view -- if I took twice as many words to tell the same story, it would only hurt half as much.
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Ah, sweet distress, thy name is Slash.

Memo to self: Do not compose Fan Fiction while commuting.

You know you're going too far with your latest work-in-progress when you bump into an old friend as you get off the train and they look at your face and say "blimey, who died?" to you.

Ready for beta in a few day's time, volunteers sought. Not a pairing I've done before. Not a pairing I've seen before, even.

And it'll be another short one. Some would say too short.
I take a different view -- if I took twice as many words to tell the same story, it would only hurt half as much.
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