[FIC] Saints and Sinners

[smithy161.livejournal.com]

I haven't really posted fic here before, and I almost said "be kind to the newbie", but I don't want that at all. This is the prologue of my first multi-chapter M*A*S*H fanfic, and I want you to be as ruthless as possible in reviewing it. More chapters to follow shortly, I hope.

Title: Saints and Sinners
Author: Louiseifer (aka Smithy)
Rating: Can't understand the new ff.net ratings. Let's just say it won't be any more graphic on the blood-and-gore scale than M*A*S*H the movie, so I'm assuming you'll all have seen that and won't be scared off by anything in this fic. You're all here for slash anyway, so I don't think I need to warn you about that. No idea how far the romance side will go in future chapters, so just stop reading if it gets too much.
Pairings: Hawkeye/B.J. Only the finest.
Summary: Morality is a tricky subject in wartime, but the Padre finds himself at a spiritual impasse when he discovers Hawkeye and B.J. have found a fascet of peace in each other's arms.
Ff.net link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2701132/1/

Comments

[asciipo0ter.livejournal.com]

ooo, thats pretty good smithy. Please keep up the good writing and continue this piece ^.^

[smithy161.livejournal.com]

Spank you kindly ^_^

[janecarnall.livejournal.com]

Aw, I hoped there'd be something about Mulcahy in the story, and there isn't - not a glimmer of him! You tease...

[smithy161.livejournal.com]

Ah, but this was just the prologue. He makes an appearance in chapter #1, and becomes the main voice in chapter #2

[kabukiziggy.livejournal.com]

yay i cant wait until next chapters
evn though hawkeye/bj isnt totally my thing this fic looks really good