The wild mating call of the beta-reader

[lucythedragon.livejournal.com]

Looking for a beta-reader for the first MASH fanfiction I've ever completed. It's a short (two and a half pages in Word) BJ/Hawkeye. I'm good with my grammar and all that, so what I really need is for somebody to look after my characterization and voice. And perhaps a suggestion for a better title. *sourface*

If you're interested, please reply and we'll swap email addies.

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[subluxate]

bluearcher85@yahoo.com

Send it anytime.

[lucythedragon.livejournal.com]

*sent!*

[subluxate]

And sent back.