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I'm here to plead shamelessly with fellow Mash Slashers.

I have a piece that I've been tearing apart, re-writing and being angsty over for weeks, for the

hashbash challenge. I was hoping I could get somebody to beta it for me, because I have the sinking suspicion it might really need it.

So if there's anyone willing, that has the spare time, to be brutal with it (it's only about 1,200 words), I would greatly appreciate it. Greatly, greatly appreciate it.

EDIT: I should have added earlier that I'd be happy to look over other's work as well, for the

hashbash or no. I tend to have a bit of time on my hands, so if you're stuck ...