ext_16524 ([identity profile] mijmeraar.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] mash_slash2007-04-23 10:01 pm

[mijmeraar] square peg, round hole, pt 1 of 1, 13+

Title: square peg, round hole.
Characters: BJ/Hawkeye implied [feat. Mulcahy, Radar, Charles and Potter]
Prompt: Shapes.
Word Count: 238
Rating: 13+


Triangle shaped grooves in his skin, where the cross is clasped tight, sweaty palm. Francis will listen, he’ll be the light in the dark; he will never understand.

I love him father. I love him more than I should.

Francis will listen, he won’t talk. He wont’ say, I know. He loves you too.

*

Broken lines in the dirt from a nervous toe; he shouldn’t be here, they always make three a crowd. Radar can hear the words they won’t say;

We’re best friends. No, listen. We’re best friends.

Words like Korean: foreign and strange and unknown.

*

As the record spins circles, all melody, his bunkmates dance about each other; the proverbial elephant centre stage. Charles can barely muster indifference.

It’s not. It is. It’s whatever. It’s all I have.

Charles plays Mozart while they play games.

*

The canvas is square and all wrong; all four walls and nowhere to move. Potter tries yellows, and blues and purples; Potter tries every colour and fails.

He’s too much; it’s too hard to look. It’s harder to look away.

Whatever they are, it cannot be painted.

*

He holds them in his hands, all blood and valves and flesh. He feels them pulsing and it’s like having control. His own is a trinket, a shape; pastel red and fake.

I love him. I love him more than I should.

His own heart isn’t his own at all.

[identity profile] murf1013.livejournal.com 2007-04-23 03:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I especially like this part ...

As the record spins circles, all melody, his bunkmates dance about each other; the proverbial elephant centre stage. Charles can barely muster indifference.

It’s not. It is. It’s whatever. It’s all I have.

Charles plays Mozart while they play games.


... probably because I'm on a Charles kick right now. I really loved this!!!

[identity profile] murf1013.livejournal.com 2007-04-24 02:49 pm (UTC)(link)
You are very welcome!!! :)

[identity profile] bronzelionel.livejournal.com 2007-04-23 04:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautiful. Brilliantly done. Thanks for posting.

[identity profile] nutmeg4077.livejournal.com 2007-04-23 05:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Broken lines in the dirt from a nervous toe; he shouldn’t be here, they always make three a crowd. Radar can hear the words they won’t say;

We’re best friends. No, listen. We’re best friends.


That gave me chills. Beautiful as usual, m'dear. You're stunning, you know that?

[identity profile] misanthrope1.livejournal.com 2007-04-23 07:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Gorgeous, heartwrenching story.

[identity profile] dreamingjewel.livejournal.com 2007-04-24 12:45 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely! The Potter bit was my fave. The Colonel was very shrewd about assessing people and situations.