ext_59811 ([identity profile] oscar-dom.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] mash_slash 2005-08-02 09:34 am (UTC)

That last one is my favourite (though I'm such a Hawkney fan!) Little things in there seem really right (for want of a better term), like BJ kissing Hawk's neck when he was retching (urgh - poor Hawk! Far too many memories of being in similar situations... I think you feel the most wretched when you're throwing up your guts after a drinking binge; nothing is more sobering.) But yes – a really nice piece! Restrained, which is good and touching too!

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