"Radar makes his way up to the podium, as ranking officer he’s also master of ceremonies for the evening. Those who weren’t sitting at his table, and hadn’t been to one of these reunions gasp, no doubt shocked that someone who’s supposed to be dead is alive and kicking."

Um, you might want to fix this paragraph (I thought I mentioned that?)Radar isn't ranking officer, and he was never dead.

But besides that, I really do like this story. ^^