ext_149832 ([identity profile] takenhawkeye.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] mash_slash 2005-06-09 06:23 pm (UTC)

Ah, you perfectly expressed that "one leg in, one leg out" feeling. I've never thought of it put that way, but it's well-written and described right on.

As for the painful kiss, I just love it. Great imagery, and it's so lovely.

Nice job.

Farewell.

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