ext_241462 ([identity profile] teapot-yo.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] mash_slash 2005-05-01 09:17 pm (UTC)

The second one = amazing.

he knows what it is, even if he won’t admit it. Winchesters don’t get jealous, after all.

:O

he feels that God would understand - those two need to take solace in someone or they might lose it - and continues to pray for them

YES YES. That's how I think Father Mulcahy would be, too. He seems like the type to pray for someone in spite of a sin. So I like the way you've characterized him in a few little words and kept him true to his character; out of all the characters, I hate outlandish!Mulcahy more than anything. So way to be. I also really really like Colonel Potter's admission that "it doesn't seem to surprising."

ALSO YOU WROTE KLINGLES WTF YOU ARE AMAAAAAAAZING. (I've been trying to write some for approximately eternity and it's not even close to being done.)

Whatever it is, it keeps them coming, usually to the supply tent at night, where they share gasps, moans, and breathy calls for more.

Color me amazed!

(Also, re: annoyingly short. I actually like short fics better than I like long fics. I don't know why, but I can never get into multi-chapter epics. So I give you a SLAP ON THE BACK and a THUMBS UP and a WRITE MORE, because seriously you can never get enough M*A*S*H slash.)

(My comments are always annoyingly long.)

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