Oh, wow. You're the first M*A*S*H fic I've reviewed, but I just can't get over the amazing lyricism you have in this... it's poetry in some places. Most places.

Wonderful characterization on both parts. How Charles is prickly and arrogant as ever on the outside, but the continual references to the blood and the Jeep and Hawkeye wears his craziness on the outside and it's just--

It's beautiful in that the words flow perfectly and it's poetic without being meandering or obscured.

Loved it.

--Kits