Between You and I

[xmusic-angelx.livejournal.com]

Title: Between You and I

Pairing: Charles/Klinger
Rating: Pg-13
Disclaimer: I don't own them!
Summary: Charles asks for a favour from Klinger and pays up.

Challenge: Response to Lisa’s ABC, 10-minte challenge and her challenge to use the line “The heat was unbearable....”

The heat was unbearable...

Comments

[murf1013.livejournal.com]

Well, you *know* I have to say it again so you laugh right? (Especially because I already read this on yahoo! and loved it!)


MY EYES! MY EYES! (Now ... where's those Tylenol and that beer?)


You know I have a tough time with pairing these two ... but I did like this fic. I'm glad you decided to keep writing!!! =)

[xmusic-angelx.livejournal.com]

:P did you read the new line? it's funny, atleast I think so xD plus I need help over there. This guy saying that I had gramatical errors and such. Shannon wouldn't leave me with any. They're saying Klinger's not really Lebanese help!

[zinaya.livejournal.com]

Hi there, hope you don't mind me hopping in. There are a few grammar errors but it came across as more writing style than bad writing. I might be too forgiving but I didn't have an issue with it.

As for Klinger, what the other guy was trying to say is that Klinger is of Lebanese decent but not from Lebanon, and he's correct. Klinger's parents might be Lebanese but Klinger is most definitely from Ohio (think Lebanese-American if you want). ;)

I have to agree with the heat comment as well I'm afraid; he really wouldn't have any more tolerance than anyone else raised in Ohio. I'm dark skinned but being raised in California, I'm done at 90 degrees!

Cute fic though, the pairing is growing on me.